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I Love My Mom
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:34:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Well, again we just got off the phone,
And, you know, I really didn't like your tone.
I can't believe all the things you said,
Your words are still ringing in my head.
That's it, I'm done, I've had enough,
So here it is, don't like it? Tough.
All I wanted was for you to care,
But you never had the time and you weren't there.
No matter what it was, you were alway fake,
Instead of giving, you were the first to take.
You can't suddenly decide to be my mother,
Because I already found her, in another.
You were never there when I needed,
You couldn't understand, buy she did.
While you looked down on my from above,
She looked into my eyes, with love.
Don't ask, there isn't anything I'd give her up for,
She's all I ever seem to have anymore.
I know it's hard for a mother to face,
When she's failed so bad that she's been replaced.
But I just got sick and tired of the shouts,
And I know that this hurts you to find out,
But if you still don't get it, then this is my P.S.
I love my mom, but her name is Ness.
~Jaime Moran~
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Re: I Love My Mom
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 03:21:25 PM AEST
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oi vey... well in honesty i would hope you can push forward! strong write, hold on to your words - and Ness! ;0)
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Re: I Love My Mom
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 03:42:21 PM AEST
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I know this was an emotional write for you. Why people think sireing or giving birth makes you a Mom or Dad is beyond me. Being a Mom or Dad means time, love and responsibility for that life from the beginning until they are old enough to go out on their own and still you are there for them if they need you. This is an exceptionally insighful write.
Rainbows,
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Re: I Love My Mom
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 04:01:27 PM AEST
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ohhhh jaime!! omg! i love you too honey! i still cant believe you told her that, lol, yeppers, your poem is so beautiful im crying my eyes out, you couldnt have written and posted on a better day, thank you for making this heart smile, ttys:) (((((((((Jaime))))))))), love you!!! nessmom heh, xoxo
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Re: I Love My Mom
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 07:51:49 PM AEST
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| Oh, this was such a surprise to read .. I was expecting something entirely different ... but this is an awesome write ... well said ... Jan |
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Re: I Love My Mom
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by Angelic_Demon on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:12:55 PM AEST
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*eyes bug out of her head* Well, guess that means we're definately sisters then. ;)
You kinda surprised me with this when mom showed it to me earlier. It's really good. Loved it.
Your sis,
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Re: I Love My Mom
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by Merry on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 03:14:15 PM AEST
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your poem is full of pain and I understand your feelings so well - as I had a bad relationship with my moither - glad you have Nessa as she is a true earth mother and we all lover her to pieces!
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