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rag doll
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 01:42:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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why don't you just drop me on the floor,
or better just throw me away,
I'm sick of being your rag doll,
just something for your play.
why don't you just toss me aside,
and play with the bigger toys,
but you know you'll come running back,
to good old faithful rag doll.
because I'll always be here for you...
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2004-03-30 13:42:37]
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Re: rag doll
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 01:53:50 PM AEST
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What a wonderful poem! I loved reading this! I agree 100% with you I'm just like you can't hold a grudge longer than an hour! Awesome write!
Anne :D |
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Re: rag doll
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:22:15 PM AEST
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That is beautiful. The ragdoll embodies so much pain and love and ...just everything. What a great concept!
Stitch |
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Re: rag doll
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 04:04:34 PM AEST
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oi vey, though i may not agree with the idea i sure as hell am familiar with this one! great write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: rag doll
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 09:19:10 AM AEST
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| Wow, that was very good. I liked the idea of using a rag doll to personify the feeling of being used. Great write! |
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