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Blood Of Fear
Contributed by
bleeding_chains
on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 01:38:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I'm sorry wiped on the wall
Wiped in blood of fear
My blood
My blood of fear
Meandering down
Drip drip dripping
To the sea of knives
The red sea of knives
The sea in which i am drowning in
Drowning in myself
Struggling to breathe
As the blood of fear takes over
My blood of fear
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bleeding_chains
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2004-03-30 13:38:49] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Blood Of Fear
(User Rating: 1 ) by Necromant on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:24:12 PM AEST (User
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What a sad bitter poem! Kinda liked it!
Anne :D |
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Re: Blood Of Fear
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 04:08:23 PM AEST (User
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dark dreary blood pumping out, ewwie... lol, sorry. stupid background music! good dark poetry, i like it! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Blood Of Fear
(User Rating: 1 ) by parkman on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 05:31:25 PM AEST (User
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Great descriptive write, excellent |
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