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Grounded Angel
Contributed by
kittenfantastico
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Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 12:57:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Grounded Angel
See her there,teardrops falling like crystal prysems down her face.
She can't return to heaven with her self esteem disgraced.
Her paper wings are damaged,and lay shredded at her feet.
The mis-deeds of her past seem impossible to defeat.
Her wrists and ankles shackled, by the unseen bonds of shame.
And though the voices tell her that everything's alright.
She knows noting stays the same, and her nerves are trembling with fright.
She was once bound for glory.
Now she's stuck in neutral.
Part of her wants to try again.
But the effort seems to futile.
All she can do is sit and contemplate.
And wait, and wait, and wait...
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kittenfantastico
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2004-03-30 12:57:19]
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Re: Grounded Angel
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by arden on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 01:23:35 PM AEST
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so beautifully written. i love how you made it all flow so nicely. wonderfully done.
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Re: Grounded Angel
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 01:39:49 PM AEST
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and wait and wait.....very well written poem! I really enjoyed reading it!
Anne :D |
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Re: Grounded Angel
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:13:56 PM AEST
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Just beautifully done! I so liked this one! Christina |
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