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Kaleidoscope
Contributed by
GeorgeJamesDelgado
on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 12:14:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Patters of love, swirling, hurling its beautiful
emotion.
Patterns of hearts, swelling, dwelling within
love's caress.
Patterns of vibrations, feeling, sensing people
in love.
Patterns of faces, traces of love on their
smiling image.
Patterns of souls, embracing.
Patterns of motion, savoring love's lotion.
An ocean of undulation, riding love's peaks!
Twist it, turn it; and by doing so, you'll find
love's patterns there,
where love's glow never wanes!
Copyright ©
GeorgeJamesDelgado
... [
2004-03-30 12:14:05]
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Re: Kaleidoscope
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by arden on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 01:31:53 PM AEST
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aww really sweet. nicely written. i really enjoyed this poem thx for sharing.
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Re: Kaleidoscope
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 03:05:43 PM AEST
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Interesting concept, delivered with a gradual increase in emotion, which I liked.
Overall, rather good.
Thanks for sharing.
Welcome to YPDC, by the way. |
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Re: Kaleidoscope
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by Bunni on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 07:02:11 PM AEST
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| The idea's wonderfully abstract; I've never thought of it that way before. I don't suppose I'll ever think of a kaleidoscope the same way. I also like the pictures the poem gives the reader--the title and the poem are very nicely matched that way. |
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