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wish
Contributed by
moon_light
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Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 10:51:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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wish you where here,
once again forever in time,
my true best friend.
wish we where back
to when we grew up
hand in hand
playing in the sand.
wish we where once again,
looking up at the sky
watching time fly by.
now your gone all that's left to do is cry.
good-bye
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moon_light
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2004-03-30 10:51:51]
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Re: wish
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 11:28:43 AM AEST
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| i truly feel your pain, i too miss friends that are far away...but look at it this way...she may be gone now, but that will make it even more special when you see her again...i hope you feel better soon, luv n hugs, phil xxx |
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Re: wish
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 01:29:29 PM AEST
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What a sad tearing poem! Very well written!
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Re: wish
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by hellsfallenangel on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 08:04:23 PM AEST
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hey nice poem i like it but read some of mine
i want ur comments ok well g2g bye jen
DEMON |
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Re: wish
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by Baby_Grl on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:43:00 PM AEST
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That is a really good peom Jenny, I like it and I know how you feel. If you ever need someone to talk to, u know I'm here. Love ya sis.
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