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Parasitic Neglect
Contributed by
we_were_left_darkling
on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 08:52:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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From satellite networks above
Sickle spray the information hub
Craning to the sky were heard
The cables hum with your return
To vacant thoughts that new-renewed
Have atomised in overview
Of what was then. And what is past
Melts in the radiance of sparks.
A sudden change is felt among
My inbred memories- how I clung
To you, you perfect fading song
Tell me what I did was wrong
Or what I said…
If what I said in hesitance
Was not called for in that circumstance.
Because now you dwindle in my mind
Some words forgotten, some left behind
Ghostly words that forced our ragged
Discourse between our two rough lagging
Anecdotal pleas for help, that wouldn’t leave
And hardly with a space to breathe
I said I would and you agreed…
Don’t you remember what was done
How I ignored your words and spun
Away on my trajectory
Away, so you would never see
The faults I hide... how I turn warmth
To bitter cold and grinning gaunt
And hatred deep, malevolent
Brooding on the hours I spent
Thinking you were everything-
Weltering in the level sting
Of lies that I could never tell
You’ve neglected me so well
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2004-03-30 08:52:27]
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Re: Parasitic Neglect
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:26:08 AM AEST
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| Very well written piece I enjoyed my reading of the same. Thanks from bernard |
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Re: Parasitic Neglect
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:55:58 AM AEST
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Yes, very well written. I can relate to the anger and hurt.
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