|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
The Knife
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 08:17:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
The knife lies on the
kitchen floor
all covered with blood,
next to it
lies a limp body.
A cold,
dead body
betrayed by the love
of her life,
she couldn't face
anymore heartache and pain,
she decided to
end it all.
The knife lies on the
kitchen floor
all covered with blood,
no more pain and sorrow,
she is now free.
Her only love
had a one night stand
and lied to her face,
she had to
end it all,
she suffered with torment
for quite a few years.
Her mind wasn't at ease
with her true love
still around,
she lies in a
puddle of blood,
on the kitchen floor,
never to be hurt again.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Jan.9/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-03-30 08:17:52]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: The Knife
(User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 11:56:26 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
IT GETS SO COLD IN THE DARK THAT COMES FROM THE HEART! COOL,BUT SCARY POEM!!
LOL-DAN!!! |
|
|
Re: The Knife
(User Rating: 1 )
by arden on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 01:09:54 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
ohhh creepy! i really thought this was just awesome. loved it. keep it up
Arden |
|
|
Re: The Knife
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 04:27:20 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
frightening and very good
good work
wildejohnny |
|
|
Re: The Knife
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 07:16:24 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| oh so many times i have felt that....hope you see brighter days....suicide is so permanant. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
