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-low at 30 thousand feet-

Contributed by TaintedOptomist on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:55:06 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



call the time
pull the sheet
the fire's almost out
wreckage nearly cleared
set the remote
rewind the tape to the point
to where you forgot hold
on and on
scream for the climax
smeared with blood and bile
press pause on your pulse
and gather your breath
catch your courage
life under a microscope
watching it all play out
set in slow motion
add background music
to when you hoped against hope
hoped for a splinter of salvation
prayed to wake up
prayed for a plane crash
......... ****




Copyright © TaintedOptomist ... [ 2004-03-30 02:55:06]
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Re: -low at 30 thousand feet- (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedOptomist on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:57:19 AM AEST
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i apollagize for the typos in this horrible keyboard


Re: -low at 30 thousand feet- (User Rating: 1 )
by Dove on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 03:30:29 AM AEST
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I like the verses..Quite intresting..

Dove


Re: -low at 30 thousand feet- (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 06:27:50 AM AEST
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INteresting use of imagery here. I like the way you used a cinematic analogy in parts. I thought I was reading a plane crash, but no - I was mistaken . . .


Re: -low at 30 thousand feet- (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:16:40 AM AEST
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Interesting subject...the twist at the end sort of jolted me. Well done.


Re: -low at 30 thousand feet- (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 10:53:45 PM AEST
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awesome poem, i liked it alot clayton


Re: -low at 30 thousand feet- (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 11:05:59 PM AEST
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nice poem, whats your email address, jw


Re: -low at 30 thousand feet- (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedOptomist on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 10:58:23 PM AEST
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TheImfamousAPT213@hotmail


Re: -low at 30 thousand feet- (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 11:55:31 PM AEST
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your email doesnt work


Re: -low at 30 thousand feet- (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedOptomist on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 07:47:22 PM AEST
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trust me it works.


Re: -low at 30 thousand feet- (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:22:31 PM AEST
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no, it really doesnt, it says it doesnt exist


Re: -low at 30 thousand feet- (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedOptomist on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:28:48 AM AEST
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eh.... teenagepoetry102@netscape.com


Re: -low at 30 thousand feet- (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 10:54:23 PM AEST
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umm yeah, it still wont work


Re: -low at 30 thousand feet- (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedOptomist on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 04:01:34 PM AEST
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well i don't know what to tell you give me your e-mail then


Re: -low at 30 thousand feet- (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 04:12:29 PM AEST
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its demonangel35@hotmail.com


Re: -low at 30 thousand feet- (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 12:04:23 PM AEST
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or u can use deaths_morbid_angel_666@hotmail.com


Re: -low at 30 thousand feet- (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 08:30:26 PM AEST
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I eally enjoyed this one keep it up kep it coming...
much love,
Dani


Re: -low at 30 thousand feet- (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 02:29:21 AM AEST
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nice poem




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