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Welcome into my world.....
Contributed by
ravisada
on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:29:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Welcome into my world
Waiting for you at the door step lonely
Longing for your love completely
Opening my heart for you widely
Wanting to hold your heart in me deeply
Welcome into my world
Let me stay with you closely
Let me touch you tenderly
Let me feel you lovingly
Let me kiss you softly
Welcome into my world
Make a place for me in your heart
Make a place for me in your future
Make a place for me in your life
Make a place for me in your world
Welcome into my world
Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright ©2004 Ravi Sathasivam
Copyright ©
ravisada
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2004-03-30 02:29:16]
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Re: Welcome into my world.....
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by Dove on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 03:32:41 AM AEST
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Ravi,
this is JoAnne Dove from ilovepoetry..Nice to see you!!!!
Great poem as usual..Your words inspire..Great to see your work..
Dove |
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Re: Welcome into my world.....
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 06:33:11 AM AEST
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Nice use of repetition here.
Reminds me of a Ride song . . .
Good job. |
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