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Darkness Comes
Contributed by
Cobalt
on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:08:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Screams pierce the night
as another mother dies.
Tortured life that won't end.
Sacred hopes and dreams
lay shattered by his hands.
Her blood seeping openly
by fresh angry wounds.
His fists continue to slam
into her already lifeless body.
She sheds no more tears
and can't beg him to stop.
But little girl sees it still.
Sobbing silently in a closet.
He finally stops, standing
over her lifeless body.
She can see his terrible face.
Always listened to mummy though
and she never made a sound.
Sat there cold, tears streaming
knowing everything is wrong.
She can still hear him screaming.
The Darkness Flame
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2004-03-30 02:08:59]
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Re: Darkness Comes
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by JadedExistence on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:20:07 AM AEST
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I don't really know what to say about this, it is beautifully written. Dark and vivid and sad. Very disturbing. I love it.
~JadedExistence~ |
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Re: Darkness Comes
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 05:02:39 AM AEST
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What a tragic poem! Really sad and you feel even sadder when you realise these things happen almost everyday! Wonderfully written!
Anne :D |
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Re: Darkness Comes
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by parkman on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 06:17:11 AM AEST
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| Excellent write, dark, vivid and showing reality |
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Re: Darkness Comes
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by AnGeL_M on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 10:26:43 AM AEST
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Beautifully Written
Although Vivid,
And Very Disturbing....
Great Write....
,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: Darkness Comes
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by arden on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 08:33:24 PM AEST
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ohhh this is awesome. so dark and vivid. loved this. well written.
Arden |
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Re: Darkness Comes
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:05:46 PM AEST
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this was crazy very vivid, but that made all the more enjoyable. Great poem.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Darkness Comes
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 04:30:49 AM AEST
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| you made me shiver........ |
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Re: Darkness Comes
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 03:18:15 PM AEST
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| so very dark and entrancing......... |
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Re: Darkness Comes
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by Fears on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 09:44:55 PM AEST
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dark....
real...
painfull...
depressing.....
beautifully written...
it is every thing!
Bravo |
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