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I am falling
Contributed by
Avis_Nigra
on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 01:56:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I am falling
right in my chest
pain
agony
each beat of my heart
I am falling
see your eyes
shock
disbelief
you look at me
I am falling
my shirt sticking against my skin
wet
warm
the patch spreading on my front
I am falling
have made you do it
sorrow
peace
deserve it
I am falling
can see the handle sticking out
fear
beauty
a tree in the middle of a red lake
I am falling
sight is going
black
white
pain is fading
I rest
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2004-03-30 01:56:24]
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Re: I am falling
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 05:29:20 AM AEST
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| im falling forever la la la lol good write |
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Re: I am falling
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by silent on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 05:59:18 AM AEST
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| Yeah but what comes next? Sorry only kidding, really liked it. |
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