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Tired..
Contributed by
Drake
on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:56:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Ugh..
Today i'm tired,
everyone is tired.
I aroused from my bed,
before the sun rose up,
my dad complained about
how tired of his job he is.
Go to school,
first period computer class,
Teacher yelled about
how tired he was of
brats messing with the computers.
Second period comes along
spanish class,
Senora is exasperated
about all the students taking field trips,
and days off
Third rolls on,
Algebra, functions,logarithms and graphs.
She rants about,
how tired she is
that i dont turn in my homework
Ahh lunch relaxtion right? wrong
people are still tired
My friend complaine about
how tired he is that our games
involve too many people
Fourth english is here,
pens drop and the teacher grumbled about
how tired she is of people being vague and
moving the due date farther away.
fifth is here history
its a bore and he fusses about
how tired he is of students talking to much.
Six now time to pick up my instrument
and the maestro bemoans about
how tired he is about having
music all over the flor and
the computer not working.
yay now im home doing homework and chores
and now here i am
tired of people complaining about how tired they are
Copyright ©
Drake
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2004-03-29 23:56:19]
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Re: Tired..
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by JadedExistence on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 01:11:55 AM AEST
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Wow, that sounds like my school, all I ever hear is how tired everyone is. hint:caffeine.
Good poem, I like how you made it into a class-by-class story. Welcome to YPDC.
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Re: Tired..
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by Justalady on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 05:44:09 PM AEST
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| Clever writing, it caused this 'tired" old lady to smile. |
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