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Caged
Contributed by
JadedExistence
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:50:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Sharp claws
Tearing my soul
A monster in my dreams
Chasing after me
I run and hide
But it always finds me
I'm in a cage
Bars closing me in
Trapping me in my mind
Every time I break through a wall
There's another behind it
I'm just to tired to try anymore
I give up
And it destroys me
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JadedExistence
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2004-03-29 23:50:49]
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Re: Caged
(User Rating: 1 )
by Drake on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:59:15 PM AEST
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| Actually its pretty good, its seems like you are fighting a losing battle...hope it turns out bette for you ~Drake |
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Re: Caged
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 08:55:48 PM AEST
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I thought this was rather good it should have been longer but thats my uneducated opinion.
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