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Trip
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:11:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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The beautiful way you looked at me
Like there was nothing else you could see
All the things you said made me believe
That I'd finally found the one who'd never leave
You took me in your arms and held on
When the one whose heart you held was gone
But lurking in the shadowed corners
Burned a reminder of the love you still owed her
You never knew how deep I'd fallen
And when you reduced me to crawling
You ignored my arms around your waist
Turned away like you didn't recognize my face
You said everything would be okay
But I feared that wouldn't be the case
I held on though you pushed me away
You drew my tears, evoked my fears, and didn't stay
You left me alone and didn't care
Like none of it had ever been there
So why should I waste my time on you,
All the promises you made and didn't see through?
You left me when I needed you most
Every night I slept with our love's ghost
Dreaming of all the ways you warmed me
You locked me in chains and made me think I was free
Your touch was so cold that it burned me
Your eyes shone so bright they blinded me
Wrapped me up and brought me home to keep
Then threw me out the moment I started to weep
Your lies weren't getting me anywhere
How you treated me just wasn't fair
Why should I have to trip over you
Just so I can take somebody's place and be used?
I don't hear what you say anymore
I don't want your heart forevermore
'Cause if you don't care then I don't care
You'll never know what love is and I won't be there
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2004-03-29 23:11:16]
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Re: Trip
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 12:15:19 AM AEST
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beautiful
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Re: Trip
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by yellow_sundragon on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 03:04:35 PM AEST
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aww, Dee, this is great!! Though sad.... I'm glad that right now your in a happy loving relationship. Or the next closest thing... lol... I miss you,
*J* |
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Re: Trip
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 10:56:13 PM AEST
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| Good job! This is really good, brings back pictures of that hallway....but very good loved the last line the most! |
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