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Tears beyond control
Contributed by
srugglingyoungster
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:08:59 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Im tears beyond control,
in a world that i once knew.
Life in one week, went wrong.
One of the last people i had left
to hold onto, left me behind.
Life as i want it to be
has ended.
Evryone one tells me not to
be so tough, but my feelings,
cant be the way everyone
wants them to be.
This whole sitution feels like
a horrible dream.
This cant be true although,
im sure it is,
i like awake shedding tears beyond control.
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srugglingyoungster
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2004-03-29 23:08:59]
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Re: Tears beyond control
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 03:18:35 PM AEST
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it makes sense, hope that life looks brighter soon... ;0)
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Re: Tears beyond control
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:20:46 PM AEST
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Oh Brittany, what a sad and lamenting poem have we here..........I'm so very sorry for you dear. 'Tis the message of this cruel old world. One day you are their friend.......the next they never knew you!
Well written poem......very interesting and understanding.........Please know I'm very sorry.
Welcome to YPDC dear.......we will love you here.........and never hurt you either
consue
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