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Where is the right way
Contributed by
lessa
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:47:41 PM in AEST
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this isn't about love,
or tragedy, or about the darkness that covers us all
it's about the fact this life is short
fun is limited
and our time is taken up by work,
hurt, pain, and frivolous things that makes even the strongest cry
the weak think they can survive and the seem smart
how can we even judge the smart and the dumb?
the weak and the strong?
all former guidelines are broken
if you are dumb you're not really dumb, you have a mental defect
if you're weak you're suffering from the fat epidemic of current society
how can we all judge what is right or wrong?
is being an 18 year old with a kid wrong?
no not the way life is not, it's normal
is being 18 with a 30 year old man wrong?
yes because.....well they all say it is
is it wrong to hate your own family?
no cause thats how kids are
is it wrong to tell them u hate them?
yeah because kids shouldn't say that
where is the logic to our lives?
where is the direction kids should go in when there is no direction but to a miserable life that only continues because of medication and mcdonalds
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2004-03-29 22:47:41]
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Re: Where is the right way
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by Kie on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:53:55 PM AEST
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| I thought you made some strong points in this poem. If you fixed your minor spelling errors, I think it would be great. An overall good poem. Thank you for sharing it with us..... Kie |
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Re: Where is the right way
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by JadedExistence on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:02:53 PM AEST
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Damn it now you made me think about some of that. Thank you very much! lol. Great poem, really does make you question some of the overall societal beliefs of right and wrong.
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