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Beautiful
Contributed by
Ms_Williams
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:44:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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I saw a girl just like me
Swimming in the wild blue sea
She was beautiful, exciting, wonderful & wild
While Im just boring, plain, lonely and mild
Her gently flowing hair and big beautiful eyes
She looked happy & gentle, beautiful & wise.
I looked at her, then at me
So plain and all of a sudden it started to rain
She began to fade losing her great complextion and I saw she was none other than my "REFLECTION"
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2004-03-29 22:44:39] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Beautiful
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:49:33 PM AEST (User
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Ohh I loved this!!!!!
Welcome to ypdc...the best poetry site on the net....
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Re: Beautiful
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 08:18:29 AM AEST (User
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Nice poem with a twist.
Keep on writing . . .
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