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Dear Daunted
Contributed by
CARAAAAA
on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:27:30 PM in AEST
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To whichever way presents the magnanimous difference
Oh what magnitude does
such a slight semblance present
Tell me
When it all falls apart again
Disintergrating at its edifices
The simpleton's jigsaw puzzle dismantled
and tucked away fastiduously into its box.
When will it be
That when
will iitself is but a figment of the susceptible imagination
Emancipated
drenched in solitude that of which
the gluttony of a voiciferous appetite
leaving behind globules of despondency .
Tonight we numb our predecessors
Goodnight , Sweet Dreams
Copyright ©
CARAAAAA
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2004-03-29 22:27:30]
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Re: Dear Daunted
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 03:14:44 PM AEST
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I've always loved your style - uncompromising, exquisite and smart! great writing girl! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Dear Daunted
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by rogad on
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| A shaking read ... very nice .. |
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Re: Dear Daunted
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 04:03:45 PM AEST
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