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memories of our first meeting
Contributed by
mystiquepearl
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:21:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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you came to me as a perfect stranger
the sun gives you radiance making you shine through the crowd
your beautiful hazel eyes sparkle and captivates me
suddenly my whole world focus just on you
the sun gives you radiance making you shine through the crowd
you walk towards me like my graceful knight of light
suddenly my whole world focus just on you
the truth you do not know is i love you the first time i saw you
you walk toward me like my graceful knight of light
you've been in my dreams ever since
the truth you do not know is i love you the first time i saw you
and i'm so glad i met you
you come to me as a perfect stranger
your beautiful hazel eyes sparkle and captivates me
you've been in my dreams ever since
and i'm so glad i met you
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Re: memories of our first meeting
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by mystiquepearl on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:24:53 PM AEST
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| this is a kind of pantoum poem..where lines from the poem are repeated at set intervals in the stanzas...hope you all like it... please send comments |
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Re: memories of our first meeting
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:34:15 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC..... This was lovely....and the repetition works well....
Jenni |
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Re: memories of our first meeting
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:51:44 PM AEST
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| very pretty!! keep writing, and warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: memories of our first meeting
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:01:14 PM AEST
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a very beautiful and emotional write.
Well done and welcome to ypdc
Larry |
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Re: memories of our first meeting
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by angrycheerios on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:34:04 PM AEST
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| very nice..it makes me feel all warm :) |
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Re: memories of our first meeting
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by Jupiter on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:49:35 AM AEST
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| I really like this. It remindes me of how I meet my girlfriend. Everything written here is similiar on how I meet her. GREAT JOB!! Keep it up! -Steve- |
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