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Observer
Contributed by
kayald
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:10:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Standing on the outside
Always looking in
Wondering how it feels
To actually be envolved
Just an observer--
A passerby
I never voice my thoughts
Watcing how others live
And the way they are themselves
It's so strange just to wonder
How it feels to be so loud and free
I hope that one day
Maybe I can experience,
Thrive,
Know my way around
Keep my feet tapping
And my head up in the clouds.
Maybe one day,
I can be heard too.
Copyright ©
kayald
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2004-03-29 22:10:31]
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Re: Observer
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by sheri on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:43:57 PM AEST
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| Nice write. |
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Re: Observer
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by spider on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:17:11 AM AEST
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| even though this is sad it coems across positive, its kool but upsetting. know how it feels to be on the outside, hope one day u find a way in |
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Re: Observer
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by Chade on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 08:57:39 AM AEST
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I no the feeling. Youve written it down perfectly.
Chade |
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