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summer
Contributed by
moon_light
on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 09:58:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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the sun sets with
purple on the water.
the stars in the night sky
glow like fire flies.
the crickets' music overwhelms
the croak of the frogs,
yet you can still hear
the gentle whisper of the wind.
the scent of watermelon
fills the air on this
mid summer night.
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moon_light
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2004-03-29 21:58:17]
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Re: summer
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:08:40 PM AEST
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Ahhh... I just loved the imagery in this... It left me with such a peaceful feeling....
Thank you for sharing this....
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Re: summer
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:13:42 PM AEST
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| very pretty, keep writing! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: summer
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 06:30:23 AM AEST
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The scent of watermelon . . . hmn. I can taste it now. Very short, but pleasant portrayal of your summertime.
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Re: summer
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 02:01:36 AM AEST
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I agree with Jenni, this piece leaves one with a very peaceful feeling. Makes me long for summer. Soon real soon.
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Re: summer
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by hellsfallenangel on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 10:55:49 AM AEST
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hey jen i like this one its very peacefull thanks for the good read ttyl bye
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Re: summer
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by Baby_Grl on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 11:53:38 PM AEST
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PURPLE SKY, YOU PUT PURPLE SKY! I LOVE PURPLE!! LOL. Hey Sis that was a kute soft poem I would love to read everynight watching the sun set go down right with a pretty color purple in the sky. lol. Keep going good at writting. ok love you sis.
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