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Splintered Visions
Contributed by
williamdye
on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:39:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Sympathetic and cold
Shattered and bold
Tired and spleen
Splintered on visions of hope
Born and died
Slice, slice, slice
The blood is so warm so warm
I laugh and laugh then twirl
Cry from devoid of
For the first time
Stream of blood
So beautiful so beautiful
Sympathetic and cold
Shattered and bold
Tired and spleen
Splintered visions of death
Slice, slice, slice
Not deep enough
Not deep enough
I must still feel the pain
I must always feel the beautiful, beautiful pain
Slice, slice, slice
I cry and cry and cry
So silent
Sympathetic and cold
Shattered and bold
Tired and spleen
Splintered visions of life
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2004-03-29 20:39:37]
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Re: Splintered Visions
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by twinkletoes on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:43:45 PM AEST
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thank you for the insight, what actually drives you to do this? I still beg to know....a very vivid and chilling poem.
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Re: Splintered Visions
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by emphaticplacebo on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:24:33 PM AEST
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| very deep stuff, full of emotion. Good write, I look forward to reading more from you |
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Re: Splintered Visions
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by JadedExistence on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:59:26 PM AEST
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I don't know if you are or were a cutter but you really captured the feelings that go along with it.
twinkletoes, the idea of self mutilation is an incredibly hard thing to explain properly to someone, chances are you will never understand fully unless you go through it yourself. People could tell you what makes them do it and how it feels but it still won't really make sense to you.
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