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Try Again
Contributed by
PsychoScissors
on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:22:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Try again~~
Hey Ma! Look what I made!
So pure so sweet
sick little child.
How dare you bleed on the carpet!
But Ma, but Ma! Look and see what your baby has done!
Get back down! I’m listening to the other!
So soft. Softer then you. Weak.
Gotta love it. Gotta love it. Gotta love all of it.
sure, sure, swallow it all.
Sick little world.
But I’m happy! Oh yeah again again.
Lost all reasons
all I have are my smiles.
Take that! Stab stab stab smiles!
Happy smiles. Sad smiles. Same difference
but it’s not what you think.
Oh yeah oh yeah I know what you think.
Again I try. I scream once more.
Just pass out. You’re sweating so bad.
But Ma, don’t you wanna see what I did?
Just give up. Life doesn’t want you
Try once more.
Oh yeah oh yeah, but it’s not what you think.
I know how it seems, but your wrong.
I’ll sleep fine. That’s something right?
Oh yeah. Your okay for tonight.
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PsychoScissors
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2004-03-29 20:22:05]
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Re: Try Again
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by emphaticplacebo on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:43:21 PM AEST
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| Great Write! Very out there, but I think that a great way to write.. Keep up the great work, and I hope to read even more good stuff from you gain soon |
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Re: Try Again
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 01:06:26 AM AEST
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| wow... a little like whoa, but i liked it a lot |
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Re: Try Again
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 06:22:12 AM AEST
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Personally, I'm glad you've come here to the YPDC and spent your time writing poems, as you could easily be doing something a lot more psychotic out on the streets.
Keep writing. |
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