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Just Breath Leann!
Contributed by
lowman613
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:04:21 PM in AEST
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I watch every breath you take,
from your hospital bed,
I watch every movement your chest makes,
and I sit here rubbing your head,
So many wires hooked up to you,
I cry just sitting here
Theres nothing mommy can do,
but just hold you near,
I havent left your side,
or went home for days,
hoping the angels are there to guide,
I sit here & pray,
I cry so hard I just cant leave, Seeing the oxygen in your nose,
Mommy wispers"Leann Just breath"
As I tickle your little toes,
Just 2 wks old so fragile & small,
struggling to breath,
Your tiny chest is giving it their all,
Trying to fight this RSV,
Mommy holds your little hand,
so you know that I'm here,
I wisper to you "Just Breath Leann",
As I wipe away my tear!
I know everyone was wondering where I was,well Leann was very sick & they kept her on Oxygen for three days!So I didnt go home!
We are home from the hospital & doing ok now! Thank God shes doing better!
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Re: Just Breath Leann!
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by LouisaMontagu on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:10:28 PM AEST
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Oh my god, I have a lump in my throat..
I feel your hope and agony....
I hope Leann gets better..!!
Louisa xxx |
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Re: Just Breath Leann!
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by Mortis-Dark on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:17:17 PM AEST
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Beautifully written..Very touching, I know grown men arent suppose to cry, but im still young at heart. Great write. I hope she does better and God bless her.
Love and Hope,
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Re: Just Breath Leann!
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by Kie on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:32:26 PM AEST
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| I also have a lump in my throat and tears in my eyes. I am so glad she is doing better. You gave me a view thru a mothers eyes. Very powerful. Kie |
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Re: Just Breath Leann!
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:34:18 PM AEST
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| omg hon, my heart is pounding, im so happy you and leann are home again! bless you both! hugs n' love nessa x |
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Re: Just Breath Leann!
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 01:07:41 AM AEST
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so glad to hear she is doing better will keep you in my prayers
Shari |
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Re: Just Breath Leann!
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 01:19:27 AM AEST
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this made me cry poor little baby Im glad that she is home and your both doing better this must be such a worry. Best wishes for rest and health to you both love you !!!!!!!!!!!
michelle |
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Re: Just Breath Leann!
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 03:34:05 AM AEST
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| So glad to read the last few lines that you are home and ok ... and praying that you both don't have to go through that again ... take care and rest ... hugs Jan |
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Re: Just Breath Leann!
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by AliB on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 05:05:33 AM AEST
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OMG, I'm glad she's better now, you must of been tearing your hair out, bless you all, hope things calm down for you now so you can just enjoy that gorgeous little girl. All the best,
Ali xx |
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Re: Just Breath Leann!
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 05:07:52 AM AEST
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Oh no! I hope everything is better now!! Please tell us she's ok! I'm so sorry to hear that!!!!!!!!! The poem is really written with a lot of anguish can't blame you! Great write!
Anne |
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Re: Just Breath Leann!
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 02:30:29 AM AEST
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SAD POEM! BUT IT JUST SHOWS WHAT A GREAT MOTHER CAN DO WITH SUCH A BEAUTIFUL KIND OF LOVE!! YOU GOT MY VOTE FOR BEING ONE HECK OF A GREAT PARENT!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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