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Title removed
Contributed by
cheech
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 07:48:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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disgusting (eww)i hate you
can't you see,you remmind me
of a ***** beaten with an
ugly stick(laughing)yep thats you
we used to be good friends
but now all you do is follow that trend(PREP!)
take a shower,than maybe you'll
smell like a flower,probably a dead flower
*****,you make me hurl
you live in a dream-world
you think you're so cute with that pearl
but *****you're even more uglier(is that impossible)?
think back to about a year ago
do you remember how days were
now you're hanging out with her
can you see what i show
you think you're so perfect
maybe you are,but never
will you be perfect in my
big brown eyes
you're so cruel,the way
you go out that door
each morning,don't you
realize people don't wanna see?
*****,you make me hurl
you live in a dream-world
you think you're so cute with that pearl
but ***** you're even more uglier(is that impossible)?
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2004-03-29 19:48:48]
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Re: Title removed
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by PsychoScissors on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 07:57:26 PM AEST
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| haha! aahh gotta love angry poetry! I really gotta kick out'a readin' this cuz I've felt that exact way about people, when you want nothing more then to back their little face in. Needless to say that completely came through in your poem. You made me hate the person you were talking about and I dunno who she even is!! Good Job! |
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by twinkletoes on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:35:50 PM AEST
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Is there a chance of reconsiliation? :-) only kidding, very angry! comes through loud and clear.
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Re: Title removed
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by chong1 on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 07:12:30 PM AEST
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that was an interesting song but you could have done better. maybe you should right about ur sister in law
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