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Falling From Top

Contributed by CuttersAngel on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:47:44 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I'm being torn apart deep within
Is this pain going to end
I try so hard to hold back the tears
And I experience again my deepest fear
I loved again, was I wrong
We were fine all along
We made promises, but will they stay
Am I wasting my breathe with each new day
Do you even see the pain I feel
Life again seems so unreal
Do the words you speak hold any truth
Do you mean it when you say I love you
You mean so much, I don't want you to leave
You said it's just us, just you and me
Are you telling me things you know I want to hear
Am I truly your only dear
I feel like nothing will be the same
This isn't real, I don't want this change
I feel like we're no longer close
How you feel you rarely show
I'm sorry for all the mistakes I've made
I'm sorry if that's what made things this way
I'm sorry for the fights and the way I was
But my feelings for you have always been love
I'm sorry for the cutting and mood swings
Happiness you always bring
I'm not perfect but I can change
No one ever stays the same
I'm sorry my body isn't what you want
My image is shattered, I fall from the top.

Copyright © CuttersAngel ... [ 2004-03-29 18:47:44]
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Re: Falling From Top (User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 07:19:59 PM AEST
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Sometimes life takes a turn.. and the never ending cycle of pain and hate exposes to real world colors... beautiful write.. your expressions and words are great..

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