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Maybe It's Time...
Contributed by
kidpoet_213
on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:13:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Against the magic of a moonlit sky
While walking hand in hand... you and I... though the shadows of our lives
We find... too soon... the darkness has closed in
Falling... where the light of our lives once resided... but has now been darken
Voices... we hear... calling in the distant winds
As they come closer... closer drifting in... only to drift away again
We find... we're turning another corner in our lives
Suddenly... pondering... why we live... why we die
Discovering the faded... unknown dreams that live within
Touching our souls... ever so gently... with memories of "way back when"
Maybe it's time... to just let go
Maybe it's time... that we both see... that we both know
The world outside of the togetherness of our lives
Maybe it's time... to just open our eyes
To a world... without each other wrapped within
Maybe we'll be happier without each other... then again...
Why should we deprive each other of that happy bliss
It should just be plain obvious... how could we have missed?
After all these years... we've been together
It just seems like it's been forever
I don't want to lose you in this way...
But my heart just can't take this life we're living another day
Maybe it's time... to just let go
Maybe it's time... that we both see... that we both know
Still... I don't know what to say or do... I haven't a clue
The words are there... they are real... but what to say to you
The day has come... for us to part
I want you to know... you'll always be in my heart
You' ll always be in my thoughts... in my dreams
No matter how hard I try to erase you out of my life... it seems...
Maybe it's time....
Maybe it's time....
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Re: Maybe It's Time...
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by Whisper on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:41:15 PM AEST
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Nice write
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Re: Maybe It's Time...
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by Kie on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 09:25:03 PM AEST
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| Well firstly let me say that I didn't think this was overly long. Secondly I wanted to scream YESSSSSSSSSSSSS, i've been there and certainly could relate. I really liked the way you wrote this poem. Well done, I commend you.... Kie |
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