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love me or leave me
Contributed by
luckymacie
on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:11:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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What did I do to make you hate me,
to make you do what you did,
you stole my heart
and won't give it back.
Why what did I ever do to you,
all you do is play with it any way.
you call came running.
you need something,
I'm the first to help
but I don't wanna help you any more.
I just want my heart back,
so I can move on.
Please just love me or leave me.
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luckymacie
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2004-03-29 18:11:26]
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Re: love me or leave me
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by neglected1 on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:17:07 PM AEST
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short n simple but straight to the point.. over al it was good.. even though maybe you dont feel like you can move on .. let um go .. if he hurt you that bad then hes not worth your time.. remain true to yourself..
luck to you
and keep them comin
~neglected1~ |
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Re: love me or leave me
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by luckycharm on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:53:52 PM AEST
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| Macie, this ya friend again. They got too many haters up her, commenting on ya stuff. I like this poem and it is expressed with deep emotion. Keep doing what u do.-luckycharm. |
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