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I Don't Cry
Contributed by
justjames
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:10:06 PM in AEST
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Those aren’t tears on the page.
It’s just some water.
Why would i shed a tear,
while writing a poem?
The page just got wet.
Yeah, that’s it.
I’m a big tough guy,
I don’t cry.
It just got wet,
It was raining i guess.
Maybe i just got out of the shower,
And my hair’s dripping wet.
What ever it is,
Just keep in mind,
My name is Jamie,
And i don’t cry!
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justjames
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2004-03-29 18:10:06]
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Re: I Don't Cry
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:47:46 PM AEST
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This is a great poem, i felt your uneasyness.
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Re: I Don't Cry
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by AnGeL_M on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:41:55 PM AEST
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Very Well Done Jamie...
Loved It......I Also Felt Your
Uneasyness....
,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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