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Stop the bleeding
Contributed by
neglected1
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:08:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Time is wasting
And still i'm following
He's got me chasing everything he's offering
I'm caving in
Stop caving in
I think he's breaking me
Down against the wall
I'm so afraid of the fall
There's got to be something better
Something better than this
Can we change?
I promise i will be selfless
How did this happen in a glance
I always saw it better through your eyes
How can we lose our place
Can we start over again?
I wanted to be your danger
Like some mysterious stranger
You said you wanted to be my savior
Ill reach out to you for the last time
On and on
It goes
I can bruise and i can bleed
Ill shed tears on you for the last time
Leave me where im laying
I've had enough of you under my skin
Ill waste time on you for the last time
I can learn i can see
I can burn and i can bleed
Its always the same when it comes to an end
And its always a shame
I wanted to take you in
I wanted to be your angel
Just not any other
I wanted to let you down
To see if you would return
I want to cry but i don't like the taste
I wonder who will take my place
I'm bleeding all over
All over
I wanted another chance
I wanted to be like...new
Its too late
I'm not going to bow to you
I thought by now you would know me
You'll never be my one and only
I'm bleeding
All over
All over me
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Re: Stop the bleeding
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 09:37:17 PM AEST
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| wow i like this poem alot.good job. :) |
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Re: Stop the bleeding
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:49:49 PM AEST
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Oh neglected this was a wonderful "feeling" poem......It was like climbing a mtn. and then being let down......only to realize.....it wasn't worth the climb.
The lamenting, the sadness, the hopelessness you conveyed....this was a very thought provoking poem. I really enjoyed it.
You have very much talent.......keep writing please.......and sharing for all of us to enjoy
love consue |
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