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Writers Silhouette
Contributed by
forever_lonely
on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 03:14:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Whispered depths within sonnets of divine despair
Carressive thoughts consumed in ink, repose of filled affairs
Hourglass sands, lost idle hands composed of paper stares
Mirrored rejection, inky reflection bound by a moonlit glare
Derived from dust creative mistrust, lingered though lament
Progressive death on silence’ mind, a fortitude of torment
Blemished scribes, corrective madness writing ones descent
Silver rings of written gold, stirring past and present
Ravens call once nevermore, In stone this question set
Demise of time a crumbling phase, a stolen thought, regret
Murky depths of ink filled books, dilemmas wont forget
Secluded words, from deep within, the writers silhouette
Copyright ©
forever_lonely
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Re: Writers Silhouette
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by Necromant on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 03:35:41 PM AEST
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Oh my !!!!!!!!!! What a wonderfully expressed poem!!!!! Full with such imagery! It's awesome! I'm really stunned! I see you kept your mastery touch! I loved it!
Anne :D |
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Re: Writers Silhouette
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 03:46:15 PM AEST
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lol...wow...my god man. I dont know if I should rave about this or pretend I never read it so I dont feel so bad about my own writes....I loved the pace of this not to mention ever other part of it. Brilliant!
The bar is raised yet higher
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Re: Writers Silhouette
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by piggy on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 04:18:53 PM AEST
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| Vivid, very vivid. I like it. Want to see more!! |
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Re: Writers Silhouette
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 04:58:56 PM AEST
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Luke, man...that is some seriously good writing there. Your rhyming and overall polish have grown rock-solid. And the way you express your message, I can describe only as perfectly dark. You definitely get a five for this one, and extra star if I could!
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Writers Silhouette
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 05:09:40 PM AEST
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An impressive vision conjured here, elocuted within complex verse and rhyming guile.
Well done. |
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Re: Writers Silhouette
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by Kie on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:10:45 PM AEST
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| Perfection, a true masterpiece. Kie |
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Re: Writers Silhouette
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by AnGeL_M on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 07:19:20 PM AEST
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Excellent , A Masterpiece
Wonderful Write
Loved It ...Also Enjoyed Reading This Poem...
You Have Such Great Talent,More Than I
Can Say About My Poems!!!!!!!!
WoW Keep Em Coming..
,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: Writers Silhouette
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 12:46:53 AM AEST
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~!!!!!!!! ~:*wow*:~ !!!!!!!!~ blow me away why dont you! luke this is truely a beautiful masterpice:) hugs n' love nessa x
@->>->- |
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Re: Writers Silhouette
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 12:48:14 AM AEST
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| *masterpiece too* ~completely taken by this poem...................... |
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Re: Writers Silhouette
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 03:38:46 AM AEST
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| Wow, Luke, this is impressive ... words that hold me spellbound ... your writing is definitely classy ... Jan |
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Re: Writers Silhouette
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 04:05:24 PM AEST
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| great expression and full of depth this is a breath-taking good write... very skillful and you have very much mastered the art of words Thank you for sharing forever, i look forward to seeing more |
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Re: Writers Silhouette
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 04:06:22 PM AEST
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| great expression and full of depth this is a breath-taking good write... very skillful and you have very much mastered the art of words Thank you for sharing forever, i look forward to seeing more |
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Re: Writers Silhouette
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by blueheart on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 11:09:33 PM AEST
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| Luke, a wonderfully expressed write. These words you have blended so well. |
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Re: Writers Silhouette
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 07:03:11 AM AEST
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That was phenominal Luke. That was absolutely brilliant. You write with your soul and it shines through every time. I thank you from the bottom of my heart for sharing these with me.
Lindsey |
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Re: Writers Silhouette
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 08:57:01 AM AEST
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When I read this, I wonder why I bother to write at all. This is perfection.
Stitch |
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