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Tears
Contributed by
Tequila
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 03:10:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Falling soft as gentle rain,
crystal drops of endless pain.
Though not uncommon they may seem,
they represent lost hopes and dreams.
They tell a story from the start,
fragile pieces of my heart
torn from every time I've cried
because another dream has died.
A silent river on my face,
each time one falls it's replaced.
You cannot hear their silent plea,
that sadness is what sets them free.
Until my eyes are closed in sleep
and I've prayed my soul to keep.
If you look close enough you'll see,
the truth is these tears are me.
Copyright ©
Tequila
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2004-03-29 15:10:38]
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Re: Tears
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 04:32:30 PM AEST
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| Well written, and a nice flow. |
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Re: Tears
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by piggy on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 04:33:49 PM AEST
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| Ahh shoot! I can relate to the comments your soon to be X says(hint, hint) You don't need no-one who hurts you delibrately, physical or mental. You hang in there and keep writing. Honey child, You can do better and being by yourself 'til the right one comes along aint so bad either. Keep ur head up!!! |
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Re: Tears
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by CuttersAngel on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:53:39 PM AEST
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| Silence overcomes..... what is there to say?? this is so awsome... |
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Re: Tears
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by JadedExistence on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:39:39 PM AEST
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Sad and beautifual and......just...wow
~JadedExistence~ |
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Re: Tears
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by Jupiter on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 11:48:50 AM AEST
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| Well written!! Why do you put up with a B/F that says hurtful things to you?? I'm a guy that totally hates other people that make women feel like they don't belong here, it *****es me off beyond beleif. I don't wan to tell you what to do but you need to get away from a person that is like that. But other than that well wrutten and great job. Keep it up and good luck. -Steve- |
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