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My Violin Plays You
Contributed by
dead_beauty
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:40:21 PM in AEST
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My Violin Plays You
You were my fresh air.
You were my beautiful distortion.
You were my fairy tale in a gift box.
You were my brand new pair of shoes.
Most of all, you were a tall sunflower
peeking out over the weeds.
So I picked you
but you didn’t belong in my vase,
with it’s heavy glass and twisty neck.
Each petal was a fighter
but they each eventually fell to their fate.
My violin plays you.
But my memory doesn't do you justice.
It plays the sound of your jet black hair
swaying in the summer breeze,
like the ghost of a raven.
It plays the comfort of your concern.
It plays your heartsong in all its fragile glory.
It plays your smile plowed over by tears.
My violin plays you as I release you
back into the garden.
To Ben,
I love you.
I wish you the best.
~Casey R. Kiser
visit me at www.ravenghost.com
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Re: My Violin Plays You
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:45:08 PM AEST
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Beautiful and touching poem.
That you may find rest.
Hur |
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Re: My Violin Plays You
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by Necromant on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:55:30 PM AEST
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What a wonderful poem! Written from the heart! The wording is perfect! Loved it!! Awesome write!
Anne :D |
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Re: My Violin Plays You
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by PumpkinPie on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 03:12:52 PM AEST
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I loved this from beginning to end! "My violin plays you.
But my memory doesn't do you justice.
It plays the sound of your jet black hair
swaying in the summer breeze,
like the ghost of a raven."-
How beautiful!You have a beautiful talent,
PumpkinPie |
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Re: My Violin Plays You
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by piggy on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 04:45:42 PM AEST
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| You know, I've played the World Smallest Violin for some folks, but not like this(lol) It's sad, stuff happens!! |
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Re: My Violin Plays You
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:52:48 PM AEST
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| I think you are the most talented writer on this site, I love your style. It's so simple yet elegant. Beautiful write. |
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Re: My Violin Plays You
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 10:10:09 PM AEST
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| excellent write. powerful, emotional, and heartwrenching. |
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