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Mister Sun
Contributed by
Whisper
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:28:24 PM in AEST
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FamilyPoems
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Hey Mister Sun
Hey there Sir Moon Hanging High
Hello Bright morning sky
Toodles to the clouds as they slowly drift by.
Hello Mother Earth May I feast on your Wonders
Won't you come out to play today.
I need those sun rays to wrap their arms around me.
I need the earthy winds to gently Cool my Face
Thank God for the feeling of soil between my feet, curlying my toes deep within and the fresh clean scent of a Coming Rain, soon to begin.
Hello Life , It's me again Just checking in.
To say Hi, How are ya doing ?
Are We Humans in trouble again.
We have no wrong intensions,
we only wish to explore.
But Perhap Somethings are better left alone.
Thank you Mister Sun and Hey There Mister Moon
Have we said our Thanks to You for the Dawn
With each new day you give us
I guess III stick around.
Copyright ©
Whisper
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2004-03-29 14:28:24]
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Re: Mister Sun
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:33:44 PM AEST
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Standing ovation here......bravo. This just puts me in a great mood!! :o)
Thank you
very well done
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Mister Sun
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:35:57 PM AEST
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Wow, you know how to address the Universe!
Good poem!
Hur |
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Re: Mister Sun
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by Necromant on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:39:12 PM AEST
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Oh I loved this poem! Its really great!!! Loved the style in which you wrote it! Really amazing!!
Anne :D |
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Re: Mister Sun
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by faithmairee on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 08:45:09 PM AEST
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this was an interesting poem...nice style and full of charm!
Faith : ) |
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