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the old oak tree
Contributed by
loopylou
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:27:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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carved initials into the ole oak tree
a forgotten script
just like you forgot me
words engraved with a silver knife
reminiscing passages of an old life
wind whistles a tale of a dreamless dream
sky lies there watching never sleeps
a heart's wilderness wild
emotional fits of a possessed child
waiting
just waiting for you
to pull me from this tainted universe so lonely and blue
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loopylou
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2004-03-29 14:27:37]
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Re: the old oak tree
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:34:48 PM AEST
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Strong 'words painting'!
Hur |
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Re: the old oak tree
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by gery_giggles on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 09:58:35 PM AEST
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this is sad.....i liked this poem though..stay strong!
luv always |
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Re: the old oak tree
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by faithmairee on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 08:40:11 PM AEST
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brilliant write, perfect flow to it and your delivery was very powerful...keep those great writes coming!
Faith : ) |
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Re: the old oak tree
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:46:41 PM AEST
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| great poem. made me feel sad...thats really good...it's hard for me to find a poem i can feel the words in so well.. |
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