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Hasty Love
Contributed by
Corruptor
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Friday, 20th September 2002 @ 09:48:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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In hasty love
I found a war
That raged on the smooth
Terrain of a young woman’s countenance.
I fell in the abyss of her
Pretty eyes, of which gaze turned
My blood to ice,
But the warmth of her
Fiery breath
My heart melted and
My skin set ablaze.
But it wasn’t meant to be,
For hasty love brings hasty parting.
In the end all I could see
Was the world, looking at me and laughing.
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Corruptor
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2002-09-20 21:48:44]
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Re: Hasty Love
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by Chrissie on
Friday, 20th September 2002 @ 10:19:18 PM AEST
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Another outstanding piece...I love your writing
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Re: Hasty Love
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by chatabox on
Saturday, 21st September 2002 @ 04:18:59 AM AEST
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nah, noone was laughing at you.....love hurts!
Great piece of poetry
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