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Philosophy of a Grave
Contributed by
kellros
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:07:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Carved into self a benevolent rage,
an eternal fire burning within,
a pain that holy water doesn't vanquish
grieving for the death within
Sinking within oneself to a darker plane,
where death roams free from the pain within,
the skies so dark, poisenous vapours,
can barely breathe
The darkness inside me just won't leave,
it has infested my mind,
rotten my soul,
made life a grave,
and made oceans roar with mighty waves
Winds twirl as tornado's are created,
volcano's erupt and the earth is bounded,
a life is born, a city was founded,
dragons flew, people they ate,
now all is heading to a snowy grave
Copyright ©
kellros
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2004-03-29 14:07:37]
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Re: Philosophy of a Grave
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by Stitch on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:40:23 PM AEST
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I know those demons. You have portrayed them realistically here.
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Re: Philosophy of a Grave
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by dead_beauty on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:43:46 PM AEST
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| Your darkness is beatiful...this poem is fantastic! Most days, I feel exactly like you described in this piece! Thanks for sharing! :):)~ravenghost |
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Re: Philosophy of a Grave
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by arden on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 03:15:07 PM AEST
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oh i like this. really dark and awesome. just a really good write. love it.
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