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Todays My Day!
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:17:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The taste is sour,
in my mouth,
"today's my day",
i have no doubt!
my brain is swollen,
in my skull,
and life around,
just looks soo dull.
yesterday,
just mashed me up,
my life is !
it made me erupt!
now i know,
"todays my day",
everything sucks,
and won't go away!
engraved in marks/scars,
on my skin,
are my self-harm marks,
it's my self-harm sin!
and when you find this,
i don't care!
as long as you don't find this,
before i DISAPPEAR!
and when you find me,
screem! if you must,
bury me in the shadows,
or turn me to dust!
Copyright ©
deathdrop
... [
2004-03-29 13:17:50]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Todays My Day!
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:19:52 PM AEST
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Dark, but well-written! I hope you find a way out of this.
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Re: Todays My Day!
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by JennyFruFru on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:22:07 PM AEST
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| i like the last two lines... i hope u cheer up tho :) |
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Re: Todays My Day!
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by arden on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:31:33 PM AEST
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whoa dark and deep. awesome. i like this alot keep it up.
Arden |
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Re: Todays My Day!
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:37:35 PM AEST
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It's a shame that part of your poem has been erased. Part of the message isn't spread like that.
Hur |
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Re: Todays My Day!
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by loopylou on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:38:53 PM AEST
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| oh this is ever so sad, your poem is full of emotion and very sad its a gift to be able to tap into somones emotions like this but id love to see somthing happy from you. great write. |
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Re: Todays My Day!
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by emphaticplacebo on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:30:29 PM AEST
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| awesome write. I too liked the last two lines, but overall the poem was great. I look forward to reading more from you |
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