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After Bath
Contributed by
merry
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 12:00:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Tepid water in the bath
Lingering scent of roses
Drift in steamy aftermath
Of where we might be
Or could have been
Indulging senses
Stuck on certain words
You said last night
Avoiding truth until the end
Disruptive forces in my head
Stir up lust
Long thought dead
Embers burning bright within
Ignited feelings in my head
With hope that love
Is so much more
Than mundane plans
And daily chores
Promise me you are the one
A love to make my world complete
gmm 2004
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merry
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2004-03-29 12:00:08]
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Re: After Bath
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by bernard on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 12:11:57 PM AEST
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| A poem full of longing. I like the bath motive it is something I can emote with. I often lie in my bath and dream of past and the future and what it will bring. Thanks a lot from bernard. |
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Re: After Bath
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 12:14:59 PM AEST
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Nice, sweet and rosy!
Hur |
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Re: After Bath
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by Necromant on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:04:18 PM AEST
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What a refreshing poem Lol! I liked the way you wrote it! Great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: After Bath
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:23:05 PM AEST
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steamy dreamy.....I couldnt have said it better myself ;o) I lean toward the steamy personally (opens windows). Every time I read your writes I " see " your words. You should write a play, it would be a smash hit!!
well done sis !!
Roses, hot red ;o)
Larry |
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Re: After Bath
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by arden on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 04:57:03 PM AEST
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very nice and dreamy. i like it alot. well written keep it up.
Arden |
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Re: After Bath
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 04:28:37 AM AEST
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| Oh how I relate to this ... the hopefulness, the insecurity, the longing, the wishing ... a poem that touches my heart and prays that you find what you are searching for ... hugs Jan |
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Re: After Bath
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 12:56:57 AM AEST
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oooo i love this, passionate, dreamy, and realisticly lovely in its sweet gentle longing, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: After Bath
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 09:11:12 AM AEST
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Sounds like you and I are on the same path again. Some things take a long time to die. We learn so much from the experience though. More good stuff, as always.
Stitch |
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