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A distant time.
Contributed by
angelface2
on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:38:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Long ago lived a girl,
thought to be vanished from the world.
Her family left her far behind,
never to be known, for she always did hide.
Her once brown curls did begin to fade,
now grey with worry her family was part to blame.
For you see she lived during a distant time,
of which when she lived and died.
Her life was to short, but not to sweet.
For you see her parents,
she never did meet.
A distance time is when she lived,
to bad she died.
And her parents never survived,
to tell her that they cared
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2004-03-29 11:38:58]
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Re: A distant time.
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:49:00 AM AEST
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Sad poem. I hope this girl somehow will find peace in the end.
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Re: A distant time.
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by Mihiri on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 01:51:36 PM AEST
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Very short and abrupt; but all the same it kinda gives me an idea of what happened. Well done. [I don't understand why few people read this poem...]
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