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Crazy talk
Contributed by
little_genna
on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:58:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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This is a funny place to be,
In a room of emptiness!
Is this the right place to be?
Emptiness is cold and lifeless,
Surely no one should feel this,
Emptiness,
Whether it be a room,
Just a feeling,
Which ever, it is still wrong!
Never knowing what to,
Feel!
Yet feeling cold of,
Nothingness!
Yet knowing there is a world of,
Warmth,
But how to get there,
You will be shown the way, when your,
Ready!
Till then,
Emptiness!
Devours your life and,
Soul!
Thinking this can’t be right sounds like the work, of the,
Devil!
You would be wrong!
It is just simply the work of,
Mankind.
If you don’t fit in,
You got no,
Hope!
So maybe, it could be the work, of the,
Devil!
The devil is just,
YOU!!!
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Re: Crazy talk
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 11:09:52 AM AEST
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It is INDEED strange, but nice and original!
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Re: Crazy talk
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by gmcse8 on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 01:45:53 PM AEST
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You and the former pope must be friends. He said once that we make our own hell, don't have to have a fiery pit. We will ourselves find something just as good. We are our own devil and our own demon. bob
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