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broken inside
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 09:21:40 AM in AEST
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Lost in my own world,
trying to sort this mess out in my head,
seeing pictures of the way I wish it was,
but never knowing if they are real or fake.
Wondering which path is the best one to choose,
losing my mind amongst all the lies,
wondering if I really have anything to lose,
crying out silently for help with this lie.
Knowing that something is missing,
a hollow space sits in my chest,
wondering where my heart is running to,
trying to keep up, but I'm slowly losing you
losing sight of my heart as it runs to your arms...
...and is dropped on the floor at your feet.
My broken heart fits back in it's space,
fragments of hope painful splinters inside,
wanting to run to you, to talk to you
but also wishing I could hide,
as my broken heart lies bleeding,
killing me from the inside...
so losing you is how it feels to die...
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Re: broken inside
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 09:27:40 AM AEST
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So sad, but very well written.
I hope you will find some comfort and happiness again in your life...
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Re: broken inside
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by MandiMay on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 09:31:00 AM AEST
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| Whoa! thats really good! It's exactly how I feel to. |
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Re: broken inside
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 09:41:17 AM AEST
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| I know exactly how you feel like, I went through this myself a few years ago, still haven't really gotten over it yet. Chin up, this was a great, emotional poem. |
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Re: broken inside
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by Stitch on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:41:02 AM AEST
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Ouch! That is exactly how it feels. Time does heal you though. That wound does seal itself and eventually the space fills with other things. I know this doesn't sound like the truth right now, but it is. I'll pray for you.
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Re: broken inside
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by silent on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 11:28:45 AM AEST
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Well done, i love the last line, just adds that extra kick of sorrow. I somewhat agree it is very painful and you described it well
Silent
btw-thanks for your comment |
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Re: broken inside
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:39:22 PM AEST
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| wow. so intense, yet truthful. i hope you are happier soon. |
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