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I, Moon
Contributed by
Hurretje
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:09:05 AM in AEST
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Radiant Mother
Her blue child rocked
In her warm embrace
Swarming with life
Shining Source
Young green draws on
Her unfailing ardor
To feed its hunger
Beaming Belly Dancer
All of you bask
In her golden veil
That paints your beauty
Warming Goddess
Her believers
Gather in her ardent church
Finding comfort
Yet no envy
In the dark
Only a weak infusion
Of her face
I am the Dark Side
Of her light
I am the inside
Of her out
I am the Dark Lady
In my dim castle
Guarded by the stars
Lodge the creatures of the Night
I am your Dark Companion
In hidden musings
And private wanderings
That cannot bear the light
I am the Dark Reflection
Of your good intentions
Your upright truth
And your clear conscience
I am the true Goddess
In public reviled, but in secret worshipped
For I alone reveal
The true sense of Life
Copyright ©
Hurretje
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2004-03-29 06:09:05]
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Re: I, Moon
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by venkat on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:33:19 AM AEST
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I never revile a woman or a goddess, whether she is dark or golden..to me she is mother of universe..she cradled me in her arms..blessed me immortal knowledge..
made me lord of her universe.This poem of you is very sweet to me. welldone. venkat
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Re: I, Moon
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by AnGeL_M on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 06:49:29 AM AEST
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Awesome Write
Loved It....I Enjoyed Every Word
Your Talent Really Shows..
Keep Up The Great Work....
,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Re: I, Moon
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by Necromant on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 07:22:16 AM AEST
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WoW wonderful described poem!! I love this type of poems! And I love the moon! Awesome write!!
Anne :D:D |
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Re: I, Moon
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 07:36:27 AM AEST
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| awesome and beautiful.. |
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Re: I, Moon
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by silent on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:30:33 AM AEST
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| A true masterpiece in my mind, what an imagination :) |
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Re: I, Moon
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by arden on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:57:06 PM AEST
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im speechless. i simply love your poetry its just so beautiful. you have a great talent.
Arden |
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Re: I, Moon
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 04:11:16 PM AEST
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| This is an excellent dark write. I loved it. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: I, Moon
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 10:00:04 AM AEST
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Your writing has a fascinating and otherworldly quality to it.
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Re: I, Moon
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 03:49:49 AM AEST
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you're writing style(as i'm sure i've said before) is so unique, i truly do enjoy reading your work.
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