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A Secret
Contributed by
GrayStar_909
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Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 04:13:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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A secret
I hold in my heart
I hold it with both hands
That maybe it’s something
You might not understand
It is a feeling so strong
Yet so deep
I hold it tight
While I sleep
A secret of loving only you
It will be forever true
A secret
Like the stars in the skies
That, in my heart
My wish I repeat
It is burning
Like flames in the fire passionate heat
Copyright ©
GrayStar_909
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2004-03-29 04:13:30]
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Re: A Secret
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by Necromant on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 07:27:37 AM AEST
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Oh what a romantic poem! Hmm these crushes are really terrible bhehe. Wonderfully expressed loved it!
Anne :D |
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Re: A Secret
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:35:07 AM AEST
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So simple, so sweet... This is utter romance in a soft whisper...
Great work!
Hur |
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Re: A Secret
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by AnGeL_M on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:50:17 AM AEST
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Very Romantic Write
Loved It .....
"A Secret Of Loving Only You
It'll Be Forever True
A Secret Like The Stars In The Skies
That,In My Heart
My Wish I Repeat
It Is Burning
Like Flames In The Fire Of Passionate Heat"
WoW Loved It..Great Piece Of Work
,,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: A Secret
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:08:10 AM AEST
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Well done...no secret that you write deeply of love.....good flow.
The Wind..... |
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Re: A Secret
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 08:33:31 PM AEST
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| I liked this. It was very nicely written. Nice job. |
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