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In Your Arms
Contributed by
CuttersAngel
on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:04:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My world is quickly falling apart
So many issues with nowhere to start
So much pain I thought I couldn't feel
And this current issue seems so unreal
I went to your house and we laid in bed
So many thoughts ran through my head
Feeling like you still don't care
And it was then while I was lying there
That I cried cuz there's so much harm
And that I cried while dieing in your arms.
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2004-03-29 01:04:52] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: In Your Arms
(User Rating: 1 ) by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 03:54:05 AM AEST (User
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wow that was sad...i almost dont like it... but it is very very well written. the rhyming alone is great |
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