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Kissing Crimson Kisses
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
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Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 11:24:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I draw what would be
painful kisses
on my arm with
the tip of a knife.
But I have too much
pain inside to feel
the blade in my arm.
I am calmed and
filled with
curiosity and wonder.
Drops of red line
the cut,
slowly at first.
The color of life is
so beautiful and fascinating.
I lick the cut and
drink its crimson tears.
The sweet taste of copper
fills my mouth,
so addictive.
It toys with and fixes
my mind.
I feel so alive and free.
Others fear their own blood,
but I embrace it.
I welcome it as it
pours from the
rips and gashes in my skin.
The blood dances with
my soul, my sanity, the devil.
But really,
they are all one in the same.
They all dwell within me.
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WorthlesSanity666
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2004-03-28 23:24:59]
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Re: Kissing Crimson Kisses
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:44:53 AM AEST
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Haunting, but well written.
I hope you'll find your way out of this.
Good luck and strength to you!
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Re: Kissing Crimson Kisses
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by silent on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 10:18:11 PM AEST
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This is very powerful, gave me a little too much imagery i think :) You described this so well and the end is excellently written. It is an accurate write and thanks for sharing it. Hope you have stopped for good as the scars can/will last forever.
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