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There He Goes
Contributed by
williams
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Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 11:23:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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oh, oh, there he goes!
oh, oh, there he goes!
His walk,
I'm seeing,
his air,
I'm breathing,
his thoughts.
I'm believing.
oh, oh, there he goes!
oh, oh, there he goes!
He'll never know how much I love him!
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williams
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Re: There He Goes
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 11:30:05 PM AEST
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"I'm seeing,
his air,
I'm breathing,
his thoughts.
I'm believing"
I like that... |
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Re: There He Goes
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 11:33:18 PM AEST
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Awww this is lovely...well done!!!!!
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Re: There He Goes
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 12:36:24 AM AEST
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I agree with Daniela,
"His walk,
I'm seeing,
his air,
I'm breathing,
his thoughts.
I'm believing."
are great lines! Congrats to your sister for creating such an enjoyable poem.
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Re: There He Goes
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by JadedExistence on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:59:59 AM AEST
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I agree with all of the above comments, this is a wonderful poem. And if you are 13 and it was your younger sister than she has a lot of talent for someone so young.
Since this is your first post, welcome to YPDC.
~JadedExistence~ |
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