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Night & Day
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
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Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 10:06:43 PM in AEST
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I thought you cared.
But all you really cared about was yourself.
No need for you to pity me.
I already pity myslef.
Who was I to think I you could ever be mine.
Those night and those days.
They all seem to Fade.
Good or Evil.
Night or Day.
James or Jonas.
Stuck in your indecresent shell,
I hope you see the value of a day spent
and a day earned.
Copyright ©
Mortis-Dark
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2004-03-28 22:06:43]
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Re: Night & Day
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:51:37 AM AEST
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Good and dark poem!
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Re: Night & Day
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 08:40:45 PM AEST
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another amazingly wonderful write mortis, you have quite the talent. the emotion was so strong. thank you for sharing
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Re: Night & Day
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:40:14 PM AEST
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| this is truly great. |
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