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NO giving UP
Contributed by
bro
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Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 10:06:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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He gave up his life
Because she gave up hers
Or so he thought
And so she fought
To strive for the best
The best she could give
Until she lay to rest
by a gun in a hand
of a man with no fan
to like him for who he is
So thus he just ran
She lay there staring
Up into the sky
Knowing that she
Will be with him
For one last goodbye
Copyright ©
bro
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2004-03-28 22:06:01]
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Re: NO giving UP
(User Rating: 1 )
by Alisteal_Rayne on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 10:10:41 PM AEST
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| Very nicely written! |
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Re: NO giving UP
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 10:49:11 PM AEST
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good poem i enjoy reading ur beautfiul thoughts young man:) Keep ^ the good work!
*XoXoXo* |
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